View Full Version : Beta for romance?

09-28-2009, 07:16 PM
I wrote a romance ages ago, I had completely messed it up by having two love interests within the book. I have since split it and I would like a beta who is familiar with the romance genre to tell me whether or not it's publish worthy and if not if it's savable.

It would be submitted to Avalon, it's not a steamy romance by any means.

It's just over 40,000 words which fits within their guidelines but I have to say I'm out of my depth when it comes to romance. I am fond of the story though and would like to see what I can do with it.


09-29-2009, 06:36 AM
I'm willing to take a look for you. I love romance, but I probably couldn't get to the project until the end of the week.
And also, I'm awful with grammar, so I won't be any help in that area.

09-29-2009, 07:07 AM
Thanks, I'll send you a pm so we can exchange info. The biggest things I need looked at are story and character since this isn't my normal playground.