View Full Version : Need Betas for Sci-fi novel, "Resurrection"

09-15-2009, 03:02 AM
Need Betas for my 146,000 Sci-Fi novel. I am looking for any level of criticism with specific to general feedback. Also need help deciding which scenes to cut out to reduce the word count, and tighten up the manuscript. General feedback is also needed to give me a sense of things readers might need fixed. Looking to query agents soon. Here is more info if you're interested.

Title: Resurrection
Genre: Science Fiction (YA)
Feedback: word count, pacing, plot, flow, character arcs, tone, voice, concept, etc.

*Note: Because of the larger word count, I'm willing to start with partials and move forward if you're still interested.

09-15-2009, 01:49 PM
I went to take a peek but didn't know the password.

09-15-2009, 11:00 PM
The password for SYW is right in the description before you click the forum link. But just in case, it's "vista". You can check out the first chapter now! And I'll also send over the first four chapters you requested. Thanks a lot for doing this! =))

09-16-2009, 07:12 PM
I emailed you my comments on the first 3 chapters.

09-17-2009, 05:03 AM
Thanks! =) I'm going to check them out and email you any questions I might have regarding the suggestions.

09-27-2009, 01:25 PM
Great, I just had a few comments.