Practice #42 - Sex in the Park

ELMontague · Sep 10, 2009

Your votes have been counted and we want to write about having sex in the park. Keep it short, a paragraph or so, and have fun.

http://www.absolutewrite.com/forums/showthread.php?p=4027000#post4027000

Brindle Chase · Sep 11, 2009

Are we allowed to put up something larger than a paragraph? I have a scene from a rough draft I finished, that happens to have a park sex scene in it... I would love to get some feedback on it. its rough draft... but complete?

Synonym · Sep 11, 2009

Well, I'm always stretching the limits of acceptable word count. Sometimes up to almost 500. If it's a long scene maybe put it in SYW separately and use a title to tie to the exercise. Or leave a post here inviting people to go look and give you some feedback?

ELMontague · Sep 11, 2009

Put as much as you like. I've just found that we get lots of participation on the paragraph practices and very little on the longer ones.

Synonym · Sep 11, 2009

Or, what he said.

ELMontague · Sep 12, 2009

My wee little short is lonely out there.

Synonym · Sep 12, 2009

Busy, busy, busy rewriting. I'll get to it.

Practice #42 - Sex in the Park

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Brindle Chase

Dancing on the edge

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