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The story is done except for the final chapter. It's currently at 89k(ish) but I stopped to go back and do the edits and remind myself what I need to tie up. This seems a good time to get some feedback on the content.
Not asking for a full read. The first three chapters come to 16,181 words. My main goal is to get general feedback on the story, characters, flow and any habitual violations I may be guilty of, that I'm unaware of. While I want to be tough skinned, I won't profess to be prepared for the hard nails approach. Already tossed a story this year because it got slaughtered in SYW. This is supposed to be the one to salvage the bruised esteem
To get the general idea, here's a link to the query. It still needs work but gives the gist
http://absolutewrite.com/forums/showthread.php?t=151627
*passes out the muffins and milk*
Not asking for a full read. The first three chapters come to 16,181 words. My main goal is to get general feedback on the story, characters, flow and any habitual violations I may be guilty of, that I'm unaware of. While I want to be tough skinned, I won't profess to be prepared for the hard nails approach. Already tossed a story this year because it got slaughtered in SYW. This is supposed to be the one to salvage the bruised esteem
To get the general idea, here's a link to the query. It still needs work but gives the gist
http://absolutewrite.com/forums/showthread.php?t=151627
*passes out the muffins and milk*