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I can't make up my mind on which POV I prefer. Would someone please, just as a one time deal, read the first chapter of my vampire story in third person and in first?

I'd like to know which version grabs you more.

Roughly 14 pages.

Thanks!
 
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If all your looking for is an opinion on POV than I'd be glad to! I'm not to great at looking for grammical errors. Plus vampire's are my thing so it would be no proble. lol But if you want a wide variety of opinions then you might want post the chapter in the SYW section.
 
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