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I have been lucky enough to have a couple of agents express interest in my novel, and one now has it under an exclusive review. This is the letter I was going to send the second agent who just asked for a partial. Am I saying too much? Not enough? The wrong thing(s)?
Thanks for all input and suggestions.
Dear Ms. Agent,
Thank you for your interest in my novel, XXXXX. Just before receiving your letter requesting the first fifty pages another agent called me and asked to review the manuscript, and asked for a thirty-day exclusive reading period. Naturally, I granted her request but should the book become available again I will immediately send you the pages you requested.
Thanks for all input and suggestions.
Dear Ms. Agent,
Thank you for your interest in my novel, XXXXX. Just before receiving your letter requesting the first fifty pages another agent called me and asked to review the manuscript, and asked for a thirty-day exclusive reading period. Naturally, I granted her request but should the book become available again I will immediately send you the pages you requested.