View Full Version : Beta reader for a travelogue

08-21-2009, 07:34 PM
Hello all. I saw no section for travel writing so I decided to post this here. I wrote a humorous travelogue that I'm currently editing and could use some feedback on. I need some truthful critiques, not harsh (though I have no problem with harsh, so long as it's helpful) but honest and tactful.

I'm mainly looking for help with grammar, punctuation, and clarity of thought. The latter is especially hard for me to judge seeing as how I know what I mean to say. I just want to make sure other people understand it as well. If anyone is interested in such a project, I posted the first few chapters, in PDF form, here (http://mattkeen.com/blog/wp-content/uploads/2009/08/Sneak-Preview.pdf). You can PM me with any suggestions or if you'd like to read the entire manuscript (it's about 130 pages).