I'm in the early stages of a short story/possible novella. Detailed plotting failed, so I just picked the scene in my head that spawned the plot bunny and ran with it. Unfortunately, this means that my characters aren't as clear in my head as I'd like them to be. One supporting character, in particular, is giving me heaps of trouble.
He's an Average Joe thrust into a rather unusual situation. For simplicity's sake, let's say he's a corporal/yet invisible ghost wandering the Earth. He isn't upset about being a "ghost". He just decided to be a "ghost" one day when given the option. At any point in time, he could go back to being a normal human.
During his time as a "ghost", he met a nice lady "ghost". They hit it off and spent a great deal of time together until, one day, she decided that she was finished being a "ghost". She went back to being a human. He's stuck in a bit of a conundrum. Average Joe "ghost" now misses nice lady "ghost" quite a bit.
He could stop being a "ghost", but he would have no memory of her... not to mention, he would return to a life decades from the time she was born, if not entire worlds away from her... Plus, he really likes being a "ghost".
He knows where former nice lady "ghost" is. She's now a human, living a comfortable life that he can visit any time he wishes. Of course, he can only watch and can't interact with her directly.
If he had a creepy, stalker personality, I would feel more comfortable writing him. As it is, he's just an average, rather polite fellow in an unusual situation. Could this sort of predicament push an average guy into some "stalker'ish" behavior? Would he be upset watching her start a family? Would he continue with his life as a "ghost" and just skulk around in her shower every other Saturday?
What I'm looking for is a general consensus from the fellas. You have unlimited access to a lady you once had a thing with/are still interested in. You're invisible. She doesn't remember you ever existed. What do you do?
Oooh, I hope this made sense.
He's an Average Joe thrust into a rather unusual situation. For simplicity's sake, let's say he's a corporal/yet invisible ghost wandering the Earth. He isn't upset about being a "ghost". He just decided to be a "ghost" one day when given the option. At any point in time, he could go back to being a normal human.
During his time as a "ghost", he met a nice lady "ghost". They hit it off and spent a great deal of time together until, one day, she decided that she was finished being a "ghost". She went back to being a human. He's stuck in a bit of a conundrum. Average Joe "ghost" now misses nice lady "ghost" quite a bit.
He could stop being a "ghost", but he would have no memory of her... not to mention, he would return to a life decades from the time she was born, if not entire worlds away from her... Plus, he really likes being a "ghost".
He knows where former nice lady "ghost" is. She's now a human, living a comfortable life that he can visit any time he wishes. Of course, he can only watch and can't interact with her directly.
If he had a creepy, stalker personality, I would feel more comfortable writing him. As it is, he's just an average, rather polite fellow in an unusual situation. Could this sort of predicament push an average guy into some "stalker'ish" behavior? Would he be upset watching her start a family? Would he continue with his life as a "ghost" and just skulk around in her shower every other Saturday?
What I'm looking for is a general consensus from the fellas. You have unlimited access to a lady you once had a thing with/are still interested in. You're invisible. She doesn't remember you ever existed. What do you do?
Oooh, I hope this made sense.