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Beta My Screenplay?

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gophergrrrl

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I usually do the beta-ing but, this time, I'd like to have someone look at some of my work. I've got a copyright on it, so we don't have to discuss any safety proceedures or anything. ;)

So, about the script; it's a drama, 89 pages, here's a logline:

A drug addicted teen sets out on a dangerous cross-country journey to find a fabled California town where drugs are not illegal.

Actually, there are several variations for this. Maybe I could also send those and get some feedback on which is better.
You can give me any sort of feedback that you feel is necessary, be it nitpicking or massive overhaul. All I ask is that you are well acquainted with screenplays or are a writer of them, yourself, and have a good understanding of what a script needs, mechanically.
So if anyone is interested, I'll be checking back. Thanks! :)
 
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