You convince them to print it by having a really great pitch. Keep in mind a paper might not print the press release how you have it, but they might take info from it. In any case, write it in upside-down triangle style (all the the important information in the first paragraphs) so when they cut it to fit a column, they can easily cut from the bottom.
As far as submitting it goes - do your research. Some journalists like e-mails. Some like hard copies. Some like to be pitched on the phone. Whatever you do, don't do send them a press release unless it's in the format they like or they'll just ignore you. If you send it in an e-mail, have a killer subject line so they open yours first.
This is all going to depend on your local area, but you cannot have a press release simply announcing your book. Nobody is going to care, unfortunately. Do a quick Google search for kinds of newsworthy stories - you'll get things like timely, human interest, etc. You MUST find a way for your book to fit into one of these angles before you pitch. It's imperative if you want the story to be picked up, otherwise the announcement of your book isn't "news" to anyone.
For example - I once worked with a literary agency who had a PR person on their team. (I have a PR degree, but I was interning at the time.) The PR professional told me how they go about get press for books. One time they had two romance authors host a book signing in New York. Well, that's all good and well for them, but not too exciting for the public, especially when you consider those things happen in New York all the time. So, they amped it up - they hosted the signing on Valentine's Day, got cupcakes and treats donated from a local bakery, brought in champagne and turned the whole thing into a fun party as an alternative for people who didn't want a date on Valentine's. And
that is the story they pitched in their press materials - not, "hey check out this book", but "don't want to stay alone on Valentine's? great party for singles hosted by romance authors X and Y..." This particular newsstory had the edge of being timely, thanks to the holiday.
And papers ran blurbs about it or at the very least added it to their event calendar for the week.
In terms of detail - keep it short. No offense, but since this is your first book it's unlikely anyone will spend a lot of space printing something about it (unless it's your local paper and they want to interview you as a human interest story). Otherwise, it's your descretion as to what you think is important and how you present it with a proper journalistic angle.
Thanks Sandy. I had a book recently released through Wild Wolf Publishing (UK), and want to include that fact, along with information about the launch party (end of August) in a press release. The book is a debut novel. It is a dark, edgy urban fantasy. I'm not sure how to go about submitting press releases. Should it be by e-mail? How do I convince a newpaper, etc. to print it, how much detail should it contain, should I include a bio, etc.
Thanks!
Ann B.