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Suspense/Thriller story

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TheAntar

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Hey all,

I'm looking for a beta reader or maybe two for now to read my story. Mostly I want to make sure of a few key points:

1) The beginning is as strong as it can be to help me sell this novel
2) The twists are foreshadowed the correct amount -- not out of left field, but surprising. This is where I definitely need the help of a beta reader.
3) any other issues you come across, though spelling mistakes and grammer problems have been basically eliminated

Let me know if anybody is interested.
 
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