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TheAntar
06-26-2009, 12:42 PM
Hey all,

I'm looking for a beta reader or maybe two for now to read my story. Mostly I want to make sure of a few key points:

1) The beginning is as strong as it can be to help me sell this novel
2) The twists are foreshadowed the correct amount -- not out of left field, but surprising. This is where I definitely need the help of a beta reader.
3) any other issues you come across, though spelling mistakes and grammer problems have been basically eliminated

Let me know if anybody is interested.

AngelRoseDarke
06-27-2009, 12:08 AM
I love suspense/thriller novels! You can email it to me. Give me a week or so to read through it.

ylrebmik
06-27-2009, 06:35 PM
I'd be interested :)