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Beta wanted for YA Fantasy.

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Miss Endless

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Hey there, I am looking for a Beta for my YA romantic fantasy in first person POV with strong female lead.

It weighs in at about 80 000 words and I prefer to send in quarters.
If you have any aversion to werewolves, vampires or fae, you may want to reconsider.

I simply need someone to tell me if the story makes sense, the weaknesses in plot and charcter and so on, but if you feel particularily inclined to point out a grammatical or structural error please be my guest.

Cheers!
 
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Hi Miss Endless!
Sounds like you've got lots on the griddle, but if you'd be interested in a trade, I'd be happy to tell you what I think. I'm "pre-published" still, but I've got 15 years as an English teacher, so I can give you as much or as little feedback as you like.
 
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Bowman thank you soo much, and I am still looking for help but I have already taken on a trade and I'm hard at work on the second in the series and another unrelated WIP so I wouldn't be able to give your ms the attention it needs.
Sorry, but thanks for the offer. I really wish I could! And yours is so small too, compared to the one im helping with (240k)!!
 
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