Okay, so myself and my two friends have written a book and want to send it out to an agent, but we want to know what you guys think of the query-which has been a pain to write!!!
Okay so here it is:
We are three co-authors who seek representation for our YA mystery novella, NEW YORK MURDER (42,000 words).
After the young queen of England is murdered during her New York vacation, an attack on the president is anticipated, so three American Secret Service agents (Chris, Sarah, and Kevin) are assigned the case of finding this murderer before they strike again. Chris had been the queen’s boyfriend in high school, and he worries that his emotions might conflict with his ability to do his job. Sarah has feelings for Chris that she tries to disguise, and Kevin finds love at a motel. The agents are required to travel all across the globe to interview suspects, and with each suspect they meet with, more and more secrets are revealed. All the while the agents are being stalked by a past acquaintance that has cruel intentions. The agents make quick progress through the case, but are they moving fast enough? The murder has their sick, twisted pattern, and will strike again soon; will the agents be able to stop this vicious killer?
We have been interviewed on Cambridge Cable in Massachusetts about NEW YORK MURDER on February 19, 2009.
We hope that you will review our query and seriously consider it. We look forward to contacting you in the future, hopefully to discuss the outlook of our book.
Sincerely,
B.B., A.C., Y.N.
Mhm, so what do you guys think???
Okay so here it is:
We are three co-authors who seek representation for our YA mystery novella, NEW YORK MURDER (42,000 words).
After the young queen of England is murdered during her New York vacation, an attack on the president is anticipated, so three American Secret Service agents (Chris, Sarah, and Kevin) are assigned the case of finding this murderer before they strike again. Chris had been the queen’s boyfriend in high school, and he worries that his emotions might conflict with his ability to do his job. Sarah has feelings for Chris that she tries to disguise, and Kevin finds love at a motel. The agents are required to travel all across the globe to interview suspects, and with each suspect they meet with, more and more secrets are revealed. All the while the agents are being stalked by a past acquaintance that has cruel intentions. The agents make quick progress through the case, but are they moving fast enough? The murder has their sick, twisted pattern, and will strike again soon; will the agents be able to stop this vicious killer?
We have been interviewed on Cambridge Cable in Massachusetts about NEW YORK MURDER on February 19, 2009.
We hope that you will review our query and seriously consider it. We look forward to contacting you in the future, hopefully to discuss the outlook of our book.
Sincerely,
B.B., A.C., Y.N.
Mhm, so what do you guys think???