I have a novella (trying for 25k words) I'm working on. I'm about 6 chapters in and I'm looking for critique and feedback.
It's a thriller/fantasy (there's a vampire but his being one isn't crucial to the plot). I have a title to it, but I originally set out to write romance and it turned into a thriller. So, now the title no longer fits, haha.
I've never written a thriller, but have written (never published) vampire fiction. I would like some tips on building suspense and anything else you think needs work.
I admit to having "was" issues and sometimes comma issues.
Let me know if you'd be interested.
It's a thriller/fantasy (there's a vampire but his being one isn't crucial to the plot). I have a title to it, but I originally set out to write romance and it turned into a thriller. So, now the title no longer fits, haha.
I've never written a thriller, but have written (never published) vampire fiction. I would like some tips on building suspense and anything else you think needs work.
I admit to having "was" issues and sometimes comma issues.
Let me know if you'd be interested.