View Full Version : Looking for willing beta for thriller/fantasy novella-in-progress

05-02-2009, 01:43 AM
I have a novella (trying for 25k words) I'm working on. I'm about 6 chapters in and I'm looking for critique and feedback.

It's a thriller/fantasy (there's a vampire but his being one isn't crucial to the plot). I have a title to it, but I originally set out to write romance and it turned into a thriller. So, now the title no longer fits, haha.

I've never written a thriller, but have written (never published) vampire fiction. I would like some tips on building suspense and anything else you think needs work.

I admit to having "was" issues and sometimes comma issues.

Let me know if you'd be interested.