View Full Version : Wanna swap chapter or whole ms?

04-24-2009, 06:07 PM
I have a 40K mg that I need critiqued. It is recently revised and I would like a fresh pair of eyes for it.

If you're not interested in reading the whole ms then feel free to just grab a chapter or two. I'm not picky!

The ms is about an 11 year old girl who is about to learn of her inheritance of special "skills" from the African tribe she descends from. There is a lot of urban dialogue so if you don't have an eye for this kind of dialect, it's probably not for you.

Thanks for your help in advance.