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So I belong to another forum that has a sizable writing section (but it's not predominately a writing forum). Most of the users seem to be preteens and teens, and I generally steer clear of the writing forum because it doesn't focus on publication so much as just writing for fun. But sometimes I venture over there, and today I found this:
The OP was upset because a beta reader had a suggestion to change some of his sentences.
And then most of the comments were "people who prefer the first sentence are just stupid and illiterate"
*Rips. Hair. Out* Oh, AW, I'll never venture beyond your URL for writing advice again.
The OP was upset because a beta reader had a suggestion to change some of his sentences.
"The glass vase looked empty as it stood on the window sil" = beta suggestion.
"The glass vase seemed entirely spurious as it stood alone on the mantle to the world outside..." = OP writing.
What is wrong, exactly, with shying away from the mundane and trying to be more... descriptive? Is it a reader killer? Or can it be very emotive?
And then most of the comments were "people who prefer the first sentence are just stupid and illiterate"
*Rips. Hair. Out* Oh, AW, I'll never venture beyond your URL for writing advice again.
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