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justinai
04-03-2009, 11:01 PM
Hey, I'm looking for a Beta for the first fifty pages of my SF Romance Erotica. It's about 13,500 words of what will eventually be about a 60,000 word novel.

I'm trying to figure out if my pacing is good, does the chemistry/sex between the charcters work, if it is too descriptive (or not descriptive enough), etc. If you have a work in progress I would be willing to repay the favor.

Also, this has explicit sex, so please make sure you are over eighteen. Not trying to corrupt any minors...

PM me if interested.