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I've set my new book (YA, fantasy) in contemporary San Francisco. The overall quest is to rescue the protag's sister, who has been kidnapped by supernaturals. I'd like some help with what police are likely to do in several situations.
1. The protag's 9-year-old sister goes missing. They find out when, at 2 a.m., the protag's friend calls him to say she's seen the kid with a strange man, walking on the street near her house, and then check to find the child is missing. The kid's dad calls the police.
2. Some days later, the protag and his two friends (including the girl who saw the missing child) call the police when they find a fortune-teller they had an appointment with beaten and tied up, near death. They stay with the injured person until the emergency services people and the police arrive.
3. A few days later, the same kids call the police late at night when a strange beast attacks a homeless man and nearly kills him. They're witnesses, having tried to stop the beast - which disappears when the police show up.
4. A few days later, some outdoor artwork goes missing from Golden Gate Park, and the police wonder if these kids are involved.
What would be the probable police reaction? Best case? Worst case?
In each case, at present, I have the police question the kids and take statements, but not arrest them or call them in to the police station.
The kids are regular kids, 15-17 years old, quite good students, from middle-class professional backgrounds. Their parents own their own homes in San Francisco, but they're not especially wealthy. The kids don't want the police to talk to their parents (except for the first time); their parents will freak out and ground them. They need the freedom to rescue the little girl before it's too late.
1. The protag's 9-year-old sister goes missing. They find out when, at 2 a.m., the protag's friend calls him to say she's seen the kid with a strange man, walking on the street near her house, and then check to find the child is missing. The kid's dad calls the police.
2. Some days later, the protag and his two friends (including the girl who saw the missing child) call the police when they find a fortune-teller they had an appointment with beaten and tied up, near death. They stay with the injured person until the emergency services people and the police arrive.
3. A few days later, the same kids call the police late at night when a strange beast attacks a homeless man and nearly kills him. They're witnesses, having tried to stop the beast - which disappears when the police show up.
4. A few days later, some outdoor artwork goes missing from Golden Gate Park, and the police wonder if these kids are involved.
What would be the probable police reaction? Best case? Worst case?
In each case, at present, I have the police question the kids and take statements, but not arrest them or call them in to the police station.
The kids are regular kids, 15-17 years old, quite good students, from middle-class professional backgrounds. Their parents own their own homes in San Francisco, but they're not especially wealthy. The kids don't want the police to talk to their parents (except for the first time); their parents will freak out and ground them. They need the freedom to rescue the little girl before it's too late.
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