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Hello, everyone! 
I recently completed a novel called, HELP! MY PARENTS ARE FROM OUTER SPACE! and I need someone to crit the first eight chapters.
The plot is roughly this: Stacie thought she was a normal 13 year old until she discovers that her parents are aliens....after she wakes up on a spaceship bound for their planet. Through a crazy, whacked out adventure, she has to rescue her father, the President of the United States, and two worlds from falling into evil hands. Pressure? Just a smidge.
I'm not really looking for a line-by-line edit, but if you offer those, that's fine. I really need someone to point out where I can tighten up my writing (I can get wordy) and make sure that I stay in proper voice.
Unfortunately, I am not in a position at this time to Beta read in return, so if you expect something in return, please don't offer to read this as I don't know when I'll be able to resume Beta reading.
If you are interested in critting this work, please send me a PM. Thanks!
I recently completed a novel called, HELP! MY PARENTS ARE FROM OUTER SPACE! and I need someone to crit the first eight chapters. The plot is roughly this: Stacie thought she was a normal 13 year old until she discovers that her parents are aliens....after she wakes up on a spaceship bound for their planet. Through a crazy, whacked out adventure, she has to rescue her father, the President of the United States, and two worlds from falling into evil hands. Pressure? Just a smidge.
I'm not really looking for a line-by-line edit, but if you offer those, that's fine. I really need someone to point out where I can tighten up my writing (I can get wordy) and make sure that I stay in proper voice.
Unfortunately, I am not in a position at this time to Beta read in return, so if you expect something in return, please don't offer to read this as I don't know when I'll be able to resume Beta reading.
If you are interested in critting this work, please send me a PM. Thanks!