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When choosing a ball for your dog to fetch and catch in mid air, make sure it’s not so small that he can accidentally gulp and choke on.
When choosing a ball for your dog to fetch and catch in mid air, make sure it’s not so small that he can accidentally gulp and choke on it.
Or, simply end the sentence with "choke"? But then it makes the meaning of the sentence ambiguous, somehow.
None of these looks quite right to me and I know I can just change the sentence around. But I can't put my finger on what's clumsy about these, and now I am curious. Are any of these versions even correct? Thanks!
When choosing a ball for your dog to fetch and catch in mid air, make sure it’s not so small that he can accidentally gulp and choke on it.
Or, simply end the sentence with "choke"? But then it makes the meaning of the sentence ambiguous, somehow.
None of these looks quite right to me and I know I can just change the sentence around. But I can't put my finger on what's clumsy about these, and now I am curious. Are any of these versions even correct? Thanks!