RAPID FIRE~May 22(night shift-now)

Albedo of Zero

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RAPID FIRE!
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You have 5 minutes to write a poem on the following topic and post it in this thread. When 5 minutes are up, everyone who participated and those who observed may comment on content of the poems.

These poems don't necessarily need the topic name in the poem proper so long as it is infered by your way of thinking.
Remember, craft is not as important in this speed game as the ideas or moods explored.

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Albedo of Zero

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Opportune moments
float in with a morning beam,
golden, alive.
fresh ideas
filter through screen
censors
taxed.
 

Albedo of Zero

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Times up!


I guess I'll have to revamp this game. :flag:
 

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Where do I go from here?
How can life go on?
How can I live
With the burden?
She never went near it before
I always warned her away
Only a moment, I turned away
How could she do this to me?
I needed it open
I needed the air
Air was all it meant to me
To her it was more,
a doorway
to unexplored secrets
The police have gone now,
I'm picking out clothes
how can I bury my child?