Ready to sub (again)?

KimJo · May 22, 2005

I have a YA novel That was rejected by the Delacorte Press contest; I've since reworked it, gotten another rejection on it, and I'm getting ready to send it out again. I'd appreciate feedback on the first chapter to make sure it's really ready to go; I've posted it in the Share Your Work forum. Thanks!

mdmkay · May 23, 2005

I'll zip over there and give it a look-see

mdmkay · May 23, 2005

I went and read but it looked as if you had already gotten so much to think about and I didn't leave any critique. I think its quite the first chapter however and it really does leave me wanting to know more.

KimJo · May 23, 2005

Thanks, mdmkay! I'm about to post a revision based on the suggestions people made.

Ready to sub (again)?

KimJo

Outside the box, with the werewolves

mdmkay

mdmkay

KimJo

Outside the box, with the werewolves