Okay, so I'm in a bit of a time-crunch here, and does anyone have time to critique ch. 1 of my YA (via PM)?
It's 10 pages long, double-spaced. The whole story deals with physical and emotional scars--it's a rags-to-riches, Cinderella, ugly duckling, whatever-you-want-to-call-it story.
Just--nothing detailed, like a top-to-bottom edit, just give me your impressions of the text as you read.
Thanks in advance.
It's 10 pages long, double-spaced. The whole story deals with physical and emotional scars--it's a rags-to-riches, Cinderella, ugly duckling, whatever-you-want-to-call-it story.
Just--nothing detailed, like a top-to-bottom edit, just give me your impressions of the text as you read.
Thanks in advance.
