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Is "Hobbled" the right verb here?

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I can't seem to phrase this any way that it doesn't sound awkward. I have a character on crutches; she's entering a room for the first time after getting a cast on her leg for a broken ankle. I can't say she "walked" or "crutched" into the room. Does "hobbled" make sense?
 

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Makes perfect sense to me. :)
 

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Yep, hobbled is the word -- walk lamely or limp with an uneven or infirm gait, etc.

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Yeah, hobbled is good. Crutched also works, and provides a clear picture of the action. Then you've also got limped, and gimped, depending on how colorful your narrator's voice is.
 
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