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05-14-2005, 01:43 PM
i wrote this in a fury...

Corrupt politicians

Talking on the news

Knocking on your door

This is ridiculous

You canít take anymore

Guilt trips leading to LSD trips

Not much left to live for

Strange place to be

The gambling man is rich

While the working man is poor

Nowhere to go

Hop on a bike

Take off on down the road

Get out of the city by any means

Wherever you go

Chaotic propaganda in the newspapers and magazines

No escape?

This your fate?

No day of mourning here for our earthly god

Money more important to the puppet businessmen

To the politicians who hold the reins

To the politicians who go to pains

Not to ensure the safety of the people

To insure them, contracting in riddles

Insurance, money there

They need the money

But we donít care

Seven days, seven nights

Mercedes limousine cruising on down the road

Guarded by crooked cops bending their upholstery

With all their might

Limousine harbouring a criminal

Thatís a heavy load

Five cops the minimum

Canít have any Tom Joad

Front-page news

Fancy names for thugs

Gangsters dressed in suits

Motivational speeches

Stay in school

Thatís the golden rule

Lack of funds,

Close down the hospitals and schools

Build houses for their political tools

Indoctrinating the masses

Spitting on the lower classes

They are better than you

Theyíre sipping champagne

Your hunting for food

Theyíre speeches seem crystal

Your ideas look crude

Need something to lighten your load

Something to lighten your mood.

Thereís nothing out there.

05-15-2005, 12:50 AM
feedback please!

05-15-2005, 12:23 PM
please... any feedback?