Writing Style Confusing

I can't say I have. Was the agent more specific? It's hard to guess what s/he meant with just that one word.

Have you asked beta readers if they could follow your story? Or perhaps posted a sample in the Share Your Work thread?

Posting on Share York Work is safe-- it's a password protected forum (not searched by googlebots) and no one here wants to steal new ideas (we have more than enough of our own.)

But your sample size of readers is small. Have you talked about your story with them? Are they critical readers? (Example: my cousin loves to read. But she doesn't analyze what she's reading-- it's just fun. She would not be a good beta reader because she likes almost everything she reads.)

Do you headhop? Shift POVs? Have a bunch of terminology or a whole bunch of names introduced early on? Lots of characters that come and go in scenes? These are all things I can think that would be confusing. Hope it helps.

I'll bet it's a subjective comment, the agent's opinion only. I had an agent tell me my style was awkward. The agent who signed me doesn't think so. So don't let individual tastes bother you. She/he didn't get it, so move on to someone who will.

I can't say I've heard that, no. But if more than one agent says it, I'd take a look at your writing and try to improve that aspect. I recommend posting in SYW. It's helpful.