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ZeroFlowne
10-22-2008, 08:42 PM
www.chrisalgoo.com

I've currently got two concert reviews, one game review, a flash fiction, a game upload (play it, it's fun :-) )and a chat with a friend. Even if you're not into games and metal, what do you think of the writing?

Thanks!

veinglory
10-22-2008, 09:12 PM
Your content is fine except fo the broken code at the top of the second post. I would say that the blog doesn't make much of an effort to draw people in and say 'this will interest you'. For example, no pictures, no individation outside of the posts what the blog's angle is, no invitation for reader participation.

ZeroFlowne
10-27-2008, 06:29 AM
Which broken code? I just installed this wordpress, I'm not so familiar with it yet.

I added a new entry (it's about my night out drinking), and it's got lots of pictures and reader participation things. What do you all think?

veinglory
10-29-2008, 11:30 PM
A Chat With Dave starts with a braoken picture link and

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As seen in IE7

ZeroFlowne
11-10-2008, 08:26 PM
Is it still? I think I fixed it.

Also, new post!