The Knowing Skull
The following is my query letter for my children's novel. Does it look alright? Thanks in advance.
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ENTOPIA is a complete middle grade novel of approximately 30,500 words. This novel will be the first in a series.
What happens when William Bee finds himself captured by the shop vacuum at a snack factory? He discovers an idyllic insect society called Entopia living inside. Strange and unique characters abound in the canister; including a roach doctor who claims to remember his life as a human, and a spider colored like a starlight mint. Will this odd assortment of insects help William rescue his brother and stop a sugar ant invasion of his beehive before the janitor empties the shop vac and its inhabitants?
I have written adventure stories for small-press magazines for the past eight years. WILDCAT BOOKS featured my work recently in the WRITERS OF THE PURPLE PAGE ANTHOLOGY. This will be my first professionally published project. I am also including sample ENTOPIA artwork by my brother, Jamison Challeen, for your consideration.
I feel confident in this novel’s appeal to the middle grade market. This story is excellent for older children and young adults. I would like to provide you with the completed manuscript or any other material you might require. I have provided a SASE, or you can contact me by e-mail or phone. I look forward to your reply.
Thank you for your consideration,
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(This project is a simultaneously submission.)
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ENTOPIA is a complete middle grade novel of approximately 30,500 words. This novel will be the first in a series.
What happens when William Bee finds himself captured by the shop vacuum at a snack factory? He discovers an idyllic insect society called Entopia living inside. Strange and unique characters abound in the canister; including a roach doctor who claims to remember his life as a human, and a spider colored like a starlight mint. Will this odd assortment of insects help William rescue his brother and stop a sugar ant invasion of his beehive before the janitor empties the shop vac and its inhabitants?
I have written adventure stories for small-press magazines for the past eight years. WILDCAT BOOKS featured my work recently in the WRITERS OF THE PURPLE PAGE ANTHOLOGY. This will be my first professionally published project. I am also including sample ENTOPIA artwork by my brother, Jamison Challeen, for your consideration.
I feel confident in this novel’s appeal to the middle grade market. This story is excellent for older children and young adults. I would like to provide you with the completed manuscript or any other material you might require. I have provided a SASE, or you can contact me by e-mail or phone. I look forward to your reply.
Thank you for your consideration,
<SIG>
(This project is a simultaneously submission.)
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