Most books have several scenes where the story is moving really really fast. Eg the climax, or any other scene where there is a confrontation etc...
In such scenes, I generally find it very annoying when the writer maintains his level of description. I would prefer it if details dropped a little during such scenes, so that we can actually see what is happening.
I'm keeping that in mind with my current WIP, but I want some opinions, in case I'm the only guy alive who thinks like this.
A perfect example would be Rober Jordan's Wheel of Time. Even during climaxes, he is describing the clothing, the hair style, the number of clouds in the sky etc.... while what I want is action!
I like the description during the rest of the book where the pacing is more normal, but at high pacing I don't like it much.
In Harry Potter the description is somewhat low anyway, so this is not an issue there.
PS: I'm speaking more about YA (and fantasy at that) but I thought this would apply to all genres to some extent.
Does anyone else feel this way?
In such scenes, I generally find it very annoying when the writer maintains his level of description. I would prefer it if details dropped a little during such scenes, so that we can actually see what is happening.
I'm keeping that in mind with my current WIP, but I want some opinions, in case I'm the only guy alive who thinks like this.
A perfect example would be Rober Jordan's Wheel of Time. Even during climaxes, he is describing the clothing, the hair style, the number of clouds in the sky etc.... while what I want is action!
I like the description during the rest of the book where the pacing is more normal, but at high pacing I don't like it much.
In Harry Potter the description is somewhat low anyway, so this is not an issue there.
PS: I'm speaking more about YA (and fantasy at that) but I thought this would apply to all genres to some extent.
Does anyone else feel this way?