View Full Version : Noir Readers

04-29-2005, 06:59 AM
I'm looking for one or two readers to run an authenticity check on a noir (very) short story I'm writing. It's the first time I've attempted this genre, so I'm not sure if I've gotten the voice a) right and b) consistent. And in terms of plot, the third act needs serious help :scared:

Thanks in advance!!