View Full Version : Can I get a crit for my FBI proposal (partial)?!

08-31-2008, 06:38 PM
I hope this doesn't run afoul of the rules but I am looking for some help from all you non-fiction writers - I have posted a couple of the section of my book proposal here:


The book is the biography of an FBI profiler I am writing and I will love you forever (or at least, long time) if you offer criticisms and/or suggestions.

Many thanks!