Raising the AW consciousness...

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...to a greater appreciation of poetry.

(Note to MR. SK-Mod: Pretty please allow me to post--and occasionally update--this thread in Office Party...even though it will be about poetry. I would like to post it here to share poetry with a wider audience here at AW.)


I have been asked to be AW's VIIth Poet Laureate. Part of the job of laureate, at least in my mind, is to attempt to instill a greater appreciation of poetry in the community at large. In my attempts to do this, I would like to occasionally post a poem in this thread that I find particularly memorable. What I ask of the AW writing community is that you simply read the poems. There is no need to respond if you don't feel compelled to do so. Simply take them in...let their words sink into and under your skin. I'm posting this thread in office party to try to get people who wouldn't normally read poetry to give it a shot. At the bottom of this post, I've included links to the poetry forums here at AW...if you feel compelled to join in on the poetry experience here. There is beauty in poetry, and the language of poetry can inject all other writing with power. I hope you take the time to read the poetry I post here...and I hope it prompts you to visit the poets here at AW. There are some fine poets here.


POETRY CRITIQUE ROOM - Password is: citrus (You don't need to critique...you can visit this forum to read.)

POETRY CHAPBOOK
- Password is: citrus (poems are posted here that are not requesting a critique.)

POETRY GAMES AND EXERCISES - Password is: citrus (You can join in on any or all of the prompt related games and exercises in this forum)


Thank you,
Kevin, who is attempting to raise appreciation of poetry.
 

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Poem #1 Your Laughter by Pablo Neruda

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Your Laughter

Take bread away from me, if you wish,
take air away, but
do not take from me your laughter.

Do not take away the rose,
the lance flower that you pluck,
the water that suddenly
bursts forth in joy,
the sudden wave
of silver born in you.

My struggle is harsh and I come back
with eyes tired
at times from having seen
the unchanging earth,
but when your laughter enters
it rises to the sky seeking me
and it opens for me all
the doors of life.

My love, in the darkest
hour your laughter
opens, and if suddenly
you see my blood staining
the stones of the street,
laugh, because your laughter
will be for my hands
like a fresh sword.

Next to the sea in the autumn,
your laughter must raise
its foamy cascade,
and in the spring, love,
I want your laughter like
the flower I was waiting for,
the blue flower, the rose
of my echoing country.

Laugh at the night,
at the day, at the moon,
laugh at the twisted
streets of the island,
laugh at this clumsy
boy who loves you,
but when I open
my eyes and close them,
when my steps go,
when my steps return,
deny me bread, air,
light, spring,
but never your laughter
for I would die.

~~ Pablo Neruda


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ETA: Pablo Neruda's Nobel Lecture - Towards the Splendid City
 
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Kevin and I tease each other a LOT, but in all seriousness this time, I support his effort here. Please click on those links above and visit the Poetry Forum - even, or especially, if you're not a poetry fan. You may be very, very pleasantly surprised.

One of my favorites and its partner can be found here.
 

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Thanks so much! (-;
 

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KTC, that is a poem that my protagonist could have written to his wife. My eyes welled up on his behalf. *sniff*

I'm glad it touched you. It's my absolute favourite poem. I'm a sucker for a Neruda love poem. And that poem is the way I feel about my wife.
 

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Cool idea for a thread, Kevin. Gives the place some class and an air of respectability. Not that Office Party doesn't have those qualities already. :)
 

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Buncha poetry snobs creepin' and sneakin' into places they not ought,
just cuz some watery tart threw a sword at some warhol lovin' writer of exceptional merit.


Heck yes I'm with you, Kevin! :)

And what a great poem to start with.
 

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Poem #2 Heavy Woman by Sylvia Plath

Irrefutable, beautifully smug
As Venus, pedestalled on a half-shell
Shawled in blond hair and the salt
Scrim of a sea breeze, the women
Settle in their belling dresses.
Over each weighty stomach a face
Floats calm as a moon or a cloud.


Smiling to themselves, they meditate
Devoutly as the Dutch bulb
Forming its twenty petals.
The dark still nurses its secret.
On the green hill, under the thorn trees,
They listen for the millennium,
The knock of the small, new heart.


Pink-buttoned infants attend them.
Looping wool, doing nothing in particular,
They step among the archetypes.
Dusk hoods them in Mary-blue
While far off, the axle of winter
Grinds round, bearing down the straw,
The star, the wise grey men.


~~ Sylvia Plath

Sylvia had a wonderful voice for reading poetry:

SYLVIA PLATH READING 'FEVER 103'
 
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I'm going to 'sticky' this thread for a bit since we're so active in Office Party. I don't want it to sink out of sight so quickly! :)


Thank you. And I am on a road trip today, so I posted another one. I hope everybody enjoys it.

Kevin
 

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Poem #3 The Eclipse by Richard Eberhart

A short one this morning...easy to digest!

The Eclipse

I stood out in the open cold
To see the essence of the eclipse
Which was its perfect darkness.

I stood in the cold on the porch
And could not think of anything so perfect
As mans hope of light in the face of darkness.


~~Richard Eberhart


Who is Richard Eberhart?


 

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And just for fun....

What is Poetry?

a slow-motion instant
sealed in the cellophane
of thought
put in words
that sing and dance
to me
no sulfurous poof
is required to prove
its poetry
it's poetry
 

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Buncha poetry snobs creepin' and sneakin' into places they not ought,
just cuz some watery tart threw a sword at some warhol lovin' writer of exceptional merit.

Heck yes I'm with you, Kevin! :)

And what a great poem to start with.

Poetinahat bestowed the Poet Laureate Honors. Are you calling Rob a watery tart?

:D
 

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Poem#4 Where the Sidewalk Ends by Shel Silverstein

I like this one for its simplicity. It calls to the reader.

Where the Sidewalk Ends

There is a place where the sidewalk ends
And before the street begins,
And there the grass grows soft and white,
And there the sun burns crimson bright,
And there the moon-bird rests from his flight
To cool in the peppermint wind.

Let us leave this place where the smoke blows black
And the dark street winds and bends.
Past the pits where the asphalt flowers grow
We shall walk with a walk that is measured and slow,
And watch where the chalk-white arrows go
To the place where the sidewalk ends.

Yes we'll walk with a walk that is measured and slow,
And we'll go where the chalk-white arrows go,
For the children, they mark, and the children, they know
The place where the sidewalk ends.

~~Shel Siverstein

Who is Shel?


 

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Tomorrow...a beat poet.
 

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I love Shel Silverstein and Where the Sidewalk Ends has always been one of my favorites.

Thanks for that lovely end to my hectic work day.