I need some help with the first chapter of my novel. It's a YA fantasy. An agent likes what I have, except for the first chapter. I have gotten this comment a lot about the first chapter. I was wondering if there is someone out there who can help me figure out what to do with it. She wants total change in this chapter. I will share the email with whoever helps.
I prefer someone who will really push me, have honesty, but not like be outright mean. Constructive criticism, please. I do take advice well.
If anyone needs to read the whole novel to grasp what is happening, it is 87k. Hope you can read fast because the agent will give me another shot. Thanks and I hope to hear from someone.
~Jen
I prefer someone who will really push me, have honesty, but not like be outright mean. Constructive criticism, please. I do take advice well.
If anyone needs to read the whole novel to grasp what is happening, it is 87k. Hope you can read fast because the agent will give me another shot. Thanks and I hope to hear from someone.
~Jen