I'm often blocked by expectations that my story has to be great from the start. It doesn't help that, of the stories I've written recently, the strongest pieces are the ones that started with a great idea, or a great first paragraph, or a great first draft. I've also written lots of lousy first drafts but haven't figured out how to turn them into gold. So that becomes a big blocking factor - there's so much pressure to come up with something great from the start that it makes it difficult for me to do much writing at all.
I think what I need is some tips on how to turn a mediocre story into something great. Let's say you've written a page or two, you've got some characters, you've got a bit of a concept or a scene, but you don't have the great idea or the great first paragraph and you're still not sure where it's going. How do you take this and create a great story? I know you can strengthen a first draft by cutting unneeded words, tightening the prose, adding more tension. But that only gets you so far. How do you revive a lousy first draft into a great second draft?
I think what I need is some tips on how to turn a mediocre story into something great. Let's say you've written a page or two, you've got some characters, you've got a bit of a concept or a scene, but you don't have the great idea or the great first paragraph and you're still not sure where it's going. How do you take this and create a great story? I know you can strengthen a first draft by cutting unneeded words, tightening the prose, adding more tension. But that only gets you so far. How do you revive a lousy first draft into a great second draft?