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Story's a YA fantasy novel (yes, I'm jumping on that bandwagon) with a 13 to 18 year old teen girl as the protag. (Fantasy element is a beauty-and-the-beast teen romance, with the neighbor boy, who's Not Entirely Human.)
Back story is that the girl was raised by a single mom. Single mom died. Her father is a wealthy and well-respected tightwad rancher who, uh, sowed an oat when he was a young teen boy. He's denied the existance of said oat (to the point of refusing to acknowledge paternity -- his name isn't on the birth certificate) for his entire life until the girl's mom died.
(The girl's mom was from the wrong side of the tracks; he was the college football star. Yadda. Yadda.)
When the girl's mom died the girl told CPS, "Well, I know who my dad is -- my mom always said he was Rich Guy. But my mom didn't want anything to do with him."
Etc. (With both the dad and the granddad truly being jerks to her mom -- and her, the few times she's met them.)
CPS then forces the guy to submit to paternity testing, confirms he's the dad, and basically says, "Your kid. You're responsible. We don't care if you were fourteen when you had an indiscretion. You take custody. Else, we charge you $x,xxx in child support a month and keep her in foster care. And we can't guarantee the kid won't go to the papers because she's pissed you won't even admit she's yours. It'll look lovely to the papers if you, Mr. Rich Influential Guy, has a kid in foster care that you refuse to take responsibility for."
Yes, there's hostility there between the kid and the dad.
Anyway. My questions are:
1) About how long would it take between the death of the mother and the judge saying, "Take responsibility, man up, this is your kid, take custody or we start charging you child support."
(His entire motivation for getting custody is to avoid paying $x,xxx in child support.)
2) Am I right in thinking typical child support to the state would be 20% of income? Or is there a formula somewhere? (This is set in Arizona.)
3) How involved would CPS be once the kid was placed in the home. Because she's a teenager, and he has young children and wife, she basically ends up being slave labor to the family and is treated like a servant. With physical abuse and emotional abuse and educational neglect and the whole nine yards -- they work her so late into the night she fails school tests or doesn't complete homework, that sort of thing. I'll note the father is 28 when the story begins, so he's not exactly mature himself, and deals with things in a very immature fashion. Her baby siblings are doted on while she's clearly abused.
(Basically, I need to figure out how much I can get away with as far as "abuse" goes. One thing that would make the story much simpler is if she's sleeping in either a barn loft or a camper in the yard because there's no bedroom for her. It would allow her to come and go without being seen.)
Also, because the protag is a mixed-race teen girl from the wrong side of the tracks, with attitude, tattoos and piercings, I'm inclined to think that CPS would be eager to unload her on her birth father because she'd be difficult to place (and keep placed) in a home. If it was a cute adoptable little caucasian baby, CPS would handle things very differently, yes?
Also, the scenario with the mother dying is that she's in a car accident. Who would break the news to the kid? Police? CPS social worker? Or whoever was available?
Back story is that the girl was raised by a single mom. Single mom died. Her father is a wealthy and well-respected tightwad rancher who, uh, sowed an oat when he was a young teen boy. He's denied the existance of said oat (to the point of refusing to acknowledge paternity -- his name isn't on the birth certificate) for his entire life until the girl's mom died.
(The girl's mom was from the wrong side of the tracks; he was the college football star. Yadda. Yadda.)
When the girl's mom died the girl told CPS, "Well, I know who my dad is -- my mom always said he was Rich Guy. But my mom didn't want anything to do with him."
Etc. (With both the dad and the granddad truly being jerks to her mom -- and her, the few times she's met them.)
CPS then forces the guy to submit to paternity testing, confirms he's the dad, and basically says, "Your kid. You're responsible. We don't care if you were fourteen when you had an indiscretion. You take custody. Else, we charge you $x,xxx in child support a month and keep her in foster care. And we can't guarantee the kid won't go to the papers because she's pissed you won't even admit she's yours. It'll look lovely to the papers if you, Mr. Rich Influential Guy, has a kid in foster care that you refuse to take responsibility for."
Yes, there's hostility there between the kid and the dad.
Anyway. My questions are:
1) About how long would it take between the death of the mother and the judge saying, "Take responsibility, man up, this is your kid, take custody or we start charging you child support."
(His entire motivation for getting custody is to avoid paying $x,xxx in child support.)
2) Am I right in thinking typical child support to the state would be 20% of income? Or is there a formula somewhere? (This is set in Arizona.)
3) How involved would CPS be once the kid was placed in the home. Because she's a teenager, and he has young children and wife, she basically ends up being slave labor to the family and is treated like a servant. With physical abuse and emotional abuse and educational neglect and the whole nine yards -- they work her so late into the night she fails school tests or doesn't complete homework, that sort of thing. I'll note the father is 28 when the story begins, so he's not exactly mature himself, and deals with things in a very immature fashion. Her baby siblings are doted on while she's clearly abused.
(Basically, I need to figure out how much I can get away with as far as "abuse" goes. One thing that would make the story much simpler is if she's sleeping in either a barn loft or a camper in the yard because there's no bedroom for her. It would allow her to come and go without being seen.)
Also, because the protag is a mixed-race teen girl from the wrong side of the tracks, with attitude, tattoos and piercings, I'm inclined to think that CPS would be eager to unload her on her birth father because she'd be difficult to place (and keep placed) in a home. If it was a cute adoptable little caucasian baby, CPS would handle things very differently, yes?
Also, the scenario with the mother dying is that she's in a car accident. Who would break the news to the kid? Police? CPS social worker? Or whoever was available?