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Hello. I'm looking for some general comments on my short story "Polluted."
It's about a guilt-ridden doctor who fights to find a cure for her patients, whose bodies have become just as polluted as the Earth, before they are executed by the paranoid board members who now run her institution.
There is some violence and some language, but nothing too over the top. I'm willing to read your short story in exchange, but since I have little extra time on my hands, I can only do this for one other person. I'll trade with the first poster to reply.
Thanks,
Jamie
It's about a guilt-ridden doctor who fights to find a cure for her patients, whose bodies have become just as polluted as the Earth, before they are executed by the paranoid board members who now run her institution.
There is some violence and some language, but nothing too over the top. I'm willing to read your short story in exchange, but since I have little extra time on my hands, I can only do this for one other person. I'll trade with the first poster to reply.
Thanks,
Jamie