View Full Version : Beta for Sci-Fantasy (Partial 50 to 100 + pages)

Indy Tarquinson
06-20-2008, 09:48 AM
This is my first one, my 'baby', and I'm pretty much starry-eyed over my characters and I really need an objective point of view to shake me out of my reverie and bring me back down to earth.

Anyway I'm nearing the 2nd act climax and I just want to make sure the story's on the right track. Even if you don't want to read the whole thing cause you don't have enough time, I can send you the outline. I just want to make sure the characters are developing correctly, the story's not boring, and basically I hope that the whole thing makes sense.

I dunno, maybe I need a writing partner or a mentor...?

Thanks so much! :D