Thanks for all your input guys. I really appreciate it. What I figure I'll do is, wait to see how the partials and fulls I have out get back to me. One of the agents who asked for my partial just got back to me asking for some minor revisions, so I have to be doing something right, eh?
Meanwhile, I'll start work on a new project as well as start sketching out an outline of how I could possibly tell the entire story in one book, to see if it really is plausible, etc. Thanks again for all your help!
E publishing is certainly something to consider, but I'm reluctant to look into it because I myself don't really read e-books, so I feel like the audience would be a lot smaller...
As for what the beta reader said. She didn't seem to like my writing style, which of course, is subjective. She also took issue with the fact that I did not portray Albinos realistically in the book (having my MC half blind and getting skin cancer would put a damper on the story...lol). She also said that my main character has a tendency to go on long critiques of human nature, which wasn't really up her alley, but it's the way I always envisioned him in the first book. She hated the main character's best friend, calling him an arrogant jerk, which, in fairness, he is. Sort of. lol. While on the subject of characters, she was upset that none of my major characters were women, which I guess I can understand. I mean, women do play a much greater role in the next two books, and especially the second one.
She also said that she felt like the actual story wasn't the most original, mainly referencing the fact that the orphan kid turns out to be a long lost prince. If only she knew what I had in store for the other books. GAH.
She also said my paragraphs were huge. lol. And that characters could at times, go on talking for a while. And...oh yea, she didn't like my ending either. lol. (I figured it would be a love it or hate it thing)
The other one recommended tightening up certain scenes, and maybe providing some more answers to the questions about some of the major characters. On the whole though, the first one liked the characters and the story. And the ending.