I've got a couple of Beta's for my WIP, but I need more!
It's a fantasy adventure with a heavy dollop of romance. I'm revising as per editor's requests, and I need to know if my revisions work. I'm not after a line by line, or grammar policing ( but if you notice anything....
) but a couple of plot points that have had to be changed, and I'm trying to balance description with action. So a general overview of if the changes work is what I'm after.
It'll be ready during the week. If you've got the time, any help would be most appreciated.
It's a fantasy adventure with a heavy dollop of romance. I'm revising as per editor's requests, and I need to know if my revisions work. I'm not after a line by line, or grammar policing ( but if you notice anything....
) but a couple of plot points that have had to be changed, and I'm trying to balance description with action. So a general overview of if the changes work is what I'm after. It'll be ready during the week. If you've got the time, any help would be most appreciated.
