I know everyone dreads writing the first sentence. It's difficult and you're not sure if it seems good enough.
Well, I finished writing my book and I liked my first sentence. Then I had someone read it and they disliked it and told me to change it. They told me what I should change it to, but I don't like it. Now, when I look back at my original first sentence, not even that seems wonderful anymore... Now I'm stuck without a first sentence that's catchy. And I don't know what to do.
For weeks I've been trying to think of a good one. I've looked at many books. Nothing.
What to do? What would you do?
Well, I finished writing my book and I liked my first sentence. Then I had someone read it and they disliked it and told me to change it. They told me what I should change it to, but I don't like it. Now, when I look back at my original first sentence, not even that seems wonderful anymore... Now I'm stuck without a first sentence that's catchy. And I don't know what to do.
For weeks I've been trying to think of a good one. I've looked at many books. Nothing.
What to do? What would you do?