As a fairy tale - poetry section

aggelos

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I am touching you , and i am feeling you

your hand , i am holding

do you know how much i adore you

do you know how much i love you?


My thought accompanies you

your each time

it doesn't live you alone

where you are i am being there..
 

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I'm just asking, do you think this might be more suitable for our poetry forums? If yes, it's no problem to move the thread, just say so.

-Derek
 

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I want , a song to be written
with love from me
which everyone will sing
and it will speaks for you ..

To say how I was in love
always with you
and how happy I felt
when i existed in your life ..

To say how beautiful you were
how sweet and how tender
and that a hug from you was sufficient
to bewitch my life ..

To speak for your fresh breath
and for your silky touch
for your lifeblood kiss
and for your fabulous love

To continue to exist
for many years , for a life
to inspire and to be loved
because it speaks for a true love ...
 

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So, maybe it's because I'm a girl, or maybe it's because I'm a cynic, but this thread kind of freaks me out and makes me think "stalker".
 

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I keep feeling that there should be pictures to "look at" while reading this.
 

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Do it slow. Do it....Dulcimo.

Did this guy do the voice on the tape in True Lies?
 

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That's a good question right now.
Okay, gang. Let's give Aggelos the benefit of the doubt. He hasn't done anything except share some work. This thread will hereby be split -- the OP will be moved to short story -- and the remainder will be making its home in Poetry. Just give me a sec.