View Full Version : Beta/Critter for Fantasy (first 50 pgs)

05-26-2008, 01:51 AM
I'm going to be sending out my mss in the next month or so (depending on how long it takes for me to write a fantastic query) to a mass of agency's, and wanted to get some good, honest feedback from people who know what to look for (you know, not from people like friends and family). It's been as polished as I can seem to get it, meaning there may be things I've just not learned/caught yet. My first chapter is the one making me most nervous. I can go into detail to those who're interested if you want.

Again, it's fantasy, the first 50 pages (or if the 50 pages ends in the middle of a Chapter it may be a few more pages). Unless you feel like looking over more, which of course I won't object to but it isn't the obligation.

This is my first completed manuscript, and I'm unpublished. Let me know if you need to know anything else before offering your awesome help. Thanks!

05-26-2008, 06:12 AM
I'm willing to take a look, though since I nitpick it might take a while for me to finish the entire thing.