When I initially write out my story, I find a lot of "that" that I end up crossing off when I re-read.
She realized that she was going to fast.
She knew that he wanted her.
If she went to him, he would say that he had seen her before.
I think all these can read without the "that." Are they both right and is it just a question of style?
She realized that she was going to fast.
She knew that he wanted her.
If she went to him, he would say that he had seen her before.
I think all these can read without the "that." Are they both right and is it just a question of style?