Ah Ray, but I was hoping for a fight scene, and so I was.
From me, a quick excerpt from
SWORD OF DOOM, a Celtic fantasy adventure. No comments necessary, I'm just offering an example of how I tend to write up-close-and-personal fight scenes. Our hero Finn Connor is caught with his pants down by ex-friend turned bounty hunter Halick O'Mearn and his two henchmen:
"Aren't you curious how I intend to defeat all three of you?" Connor said.
O'Mearn's grin broadened. "Big talk, for a man who doesn't even have a sword in his hand."
Connor tapped the side of his head.
"I don't need a sword, when I have this," he said, and on the last word he sprinted toward Dermo, arms and legs pumping. Dermo's eyes widened in surprise, then a smile settled upon his lips. As Dermo launched his spear, Connor threw himself down. The shaft glanced painfully off his shoulder but the spearhead didn't break skin or shatter bone, Daras be praised. Dermo's sword was only half-clear of its scabbard when Connor's head smashed into the big spearman's nose. Dermo staggered and fell backward into the bushes from which he'd emerged, clutching his bleeding face with both hands.
O'Mearn and Padrig were running for all they were worth, swords twirling about their heads. Padrig, younger and more foolish, beat his cousin by several heartbeats. Connor drew Dermo's sword clear of its scabbard and spun fast, countering Padrig's downward swing which would have split his head open. He continued the spin, rolling his hip and shoulder so that Padrig went flying over him and into the bushes. Padrig disappeared with a despondent wail, lost among the prickly thorns. Only his boots were visible, kicking at the sky.
Seeing this, O'Mearn slid to a stop and regarded Connor with considerably more caution than before. Now they both had swords, and O'Mearn was one man instead of three.
"Any time you're ready, Halick," Connor said, scoring little circles in the air with the point of Dermo's sword. "Let's get this over and done with."
"Ah, now," O'Mearn said, "but I sense a reversal of fortunes in the wind, so I do."
-Derek