View Full Version : Beta Readers for relationship driven screenplay?

05-15-2008, 01:49 AM
Hi everyone, I've just finished the first of my screenplay. (yay) I'm looking for help in making it better. Are there a few brave, kind souls out there willing to give it a look?

05-15-2008, 05:18 PM
How many pages is it?

05-15-2008, 10:10 PM
Thanks for your notes in the SYW section! I really appreciated them. It's 139 pages.

05-15-2008, 10:19 PM
how about a short synopsis to give us an idea of what it's about. (more than 'relationship driven' that is...)

05-15-2008, 10:58 PM
okay...I hate this part. I suck at encapsulating, but here goes.

Haunted, talented, philosopher Grace Kimball, retreats to her brother's house on the coast of Maine in search of solitude; only to be confronted by a house full of company and her own demons.