View Full Version : Requesting Bet for first two chapters of paranormal thriller Please

05-07-2008, 04:45 PM
Hi Guys, I have had conflicting opinions on the first two chapters of my newly finished thriller- some say I should strike almost the entire first chapter and start with the second- others say just revamp the chapter and yet others like it the way it is-

As for me- I would appreciate another opinion to help me decide- If anyone is intersted in reading just the first two chapters- just a little over 4K words- PM me-Or respond in the forum.

I thank anyone who responds for their time and appreciate any help- thanks so much!

Please pardon the typo in the title! Sheesh- could a mod please change that for me?