Novel ms with Betas!

This one feels a little short, but the beta who's already done a quick read says it feels complete so we'll see. Just sent it off to two & will (hopefully) bring pages to a third on Saturday for a scorched-earth crit!
What a great feeling!!

Thanks you guys!
windyrdg - I expect I'll be making some changes, but taking a break to read & work on some short pieces will be fun too.