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Granted. But, though the wardrobe is appropriate, it is based on styles from the 1970s, so you will be wearing bell-bottoms, tie-dyed tops, satin...

You don't need to be an expert to have something interesting to say! I found your explanation very enlightening, Tocotin. :) First of the five...

Still working on the bare plot I have. I have a vague ending and an idea where to start but everything in between is still eluding me. Working out...

Day 22- As I expected I spent my writing time cleaning up what I write throughout the week. Still added words just took more away. Second- Good...

It sucks that it is such a frustrating hassle to get an appointment. :Hug2: My grandad has gotten his first vaccine dose AND an appointment for...

As Turbulent Muse points out, you have a lot of adjectives (and phrases serving as adjectives), not just in the last sentence but throughout. Take a...

Lint wanted to beg for her mom not to go, but Harriet was already rushing out the door.

I watched the movie yesterday. Wow! It was good. It also featured some powerful themes like found family and being chased out of your home for being...

Day 21 - 331 words. The new WIP is here to stay. That brings me to a total of six WIPs. I watched the We Bare Bears movie in the middle of the...

MOD NOTE: AW is not a drive-by promotion site. If you are not here to become a participating member of the community this isn't the place for you....

I can't believe we're a week away from the end of January. With lockdown, I don't really leave the house and with my job currently as busy as it is,...

I just tried Kaiser again and there were a dozen openings, all new at a Northgate clinic. I actually have an appointment for Sat after next (the...

Day 21: Writing the 1 sentence summary/elevator pitch for yesterday made me think of how I should really do that for , so I did a few versions and...

Chuck Norris knows a thing or three about cinematic fights: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gAbKV6lmvDM

Arlo had better prepare himself. I foresee many pats in his future! :)

I don't think anyone has or even can scalp appointments to sell or give to others. You have to put your personal data in for any appointment. It's...

Congrats on finishing your draft April. As for the middle not meeting your standards, not to worry. You'll knock it into shape once you revise it...

Out of curiosity, which genre is the book?

BUMP! :Jump: COKEL TARGAAS CUSBERO How people ordered stuff before the internet. :ROFL: Bonus hint: Billed as "Cheapest Supply House on...

I’m even more haunted by my WIP now. Should I change the POV to something more traditional to make the story more accessible and easier to read or...

Day 20 Driveby. DRESS HER IN CHAMELEON - Finished the last preview. Day 21 DRESS HER IN CHAMELEON - Subbed. It was published. But. I...

Truly bothersome, but I'm getting by. Keeping myself busy with whatever creative things I can do. How are you guys? What's your thought about the...

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Logan's Run - George Clayton Johnson & William F. Nolan

There are a lot of descriptors in that last sentence. I’d consider cutting some things out or making into several sentences.

I'm interested. PM me.